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Tourism has been a good source of revenue in many countries and government should promote the industry. Do you agree or disagree.

#tourism #source #revenue #countries #government #industry
In
this
 modern era,
crowd
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the crowd
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 love to explore different land and try to adopt
different
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the different
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 culture, ethnicity and
other
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another
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 land lifestyle. I agree with the given statement when crowd appointment another
countrycountry
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country country
 it becomes the good source of revenue and government advertise the industrialisation. To support my point of view, when community from another
countryland
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country and
 stop as the tourist into the other countries directly
increase
 the economy of the rustic so with the help of that salary provincial can invest that salary to save their historical places and can do the renovation of the places.
For instance
, in ,India the taj mahal is one of the historical place made by shah Jahan and
people
 attract with
this
 place thousand of
people
 come every year to
holiday
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a holiday
the holiday
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 that place in
this
 way tourism is a good source of revenue.
In addition
 to it, when
crowd
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the crowd
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 stay the different places they come to know about
the
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other cultures traditions, rituals which
increase
 the knowledge of
people
 about different
cultures
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 values.
Furthermore
, when
country
 promotes their industries tourist decided to invest their money in a different business which
increase
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 the economic level of the
country
. In
this
 ,way the tax rate of the
country
 will
increase
 and government get the chance to invest the money in different sectors like education, hospitals and others which will help poor
people
 and makes
the
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 lives better and healthy. In conclusion, tourism is one of the most important sources for the government and makes the
country
 better with the help of tourism.
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