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UNIVERSITY STUDENTS ARE INCREASINGLY STUDYING ABROAD AS PART OF THEIR STUDIES. DO THE ADVANTANGES OF STUDYING ABROAD OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?

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Nowadays, the trend of making part of studies in another country is currently increasing among university students.
Although
 the costs can be a disadvantage in the budget of the student, studying abroad can be an extraordinary opportunity not only to know different cultures but
also
 to learn new languages,
in other words
, a significant life experience. In my opinion, despite challenges due to cultural differences studying overseas is an important and rewarding personal experience. Undoubtedly, making the studies in an international country is a huge opportunity to stand out from the crowd. One of the reasons for study in a different country is the personal experience, the contact with another culture, which promotes the learning of a dissimilar language, and
this
 way, amplifying the mind of the student to many possibilities.
For example
, a pupil with international education involvement has better opportunities for a job,
consequently
 a better plan of career. To summarise, having an undergraduate overseas is a great chance for personal development. To summarise, having an undergraduate overseas is a great chance for personal development.
On the other hand
, the costs to take up college abroad are very expensive, becoming everything far more challenging. Preparing themselves to make an international college is a process that demands saving.
Furthermore
, the expenses not are only with tuition but
also
 with housing and personal overheads. For all these reasons, the pupil needs to have the necessary finances to avoid unpleasant surprises.
For instance
, if the student fails on the test, resulting in reprobation, he needs to pay new tuition and fees,
in other words
, extra and unexpected expenses.
Therefore
, even being a downside with a high price, many undergraduates don't have questions about
this
 decision in their educational life. Concluding in a foreign university has its both pros and cons. In which, the personal contact is the major good point, but
on the other hand
, the high prices are a major drawback. I really believe that overseas education can offer more advantages than disadvantages,
therefore
, a unique involvement.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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