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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What us your opinion?

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Every individual nowadays want to be successful in
life
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 as some human beings think that
success
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 is the only
way
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 to check
intelligence
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, whereas other think that
intelligence
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 can be check in many ways. In my opinion,
intelligence
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 can be measured in different ways which I will discuss in
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 essay.
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 with, there are a plethora of things through which
intelligence
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 can be measured as every person have their own
way
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 to work and have their own skills.
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, in 2005 a survey in Canada shows that 70 per cent of people are successful with their own creative businesses. As I mentioned everyone has their own
way
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 to deal with a situation, sometimes you need to make decisions with your heart rather than using your brain.
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, in foreign countries where people start working at younger , the age they got more skills and more knowledge which do indicate their
intelligence
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. On other hand,
success
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 is a key to
intelligence
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 which illustrate that successful people are intelligent.
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, doctors are the main factor that shows that
success
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 is the best measure of
intelligence
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, as they study hard for their profession.
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,
success
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 can
also
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 play a major role in some human beings
life
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 and gave them more motivation to lead their
life
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 in a better
way
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. To sum up, according to me there are many factors like hard work, wisdom and love, which shows
intelligence
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 rather than just being successful in
life
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.
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