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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What us your opinion?

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Every individual nowadays want to be successful in
life
 as some human beings think that
success
 is the only
way
 to check
intelligence
, whereas other think that
intelligence
 can be check in many ways. In my opinion,
intelligence
 can be measured in different ways which I will discuss in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with, there are a plethora of things through which
intelligence
 can be measured as every person have their own
way
 to work and have their own skills.
For example
, in 2005 a survey in Canada shows that 70 per cent of people are successful with their own creative businesses. As I mentioned everyone has their own
way
 to deal with a situation, sometimes you need to make decisions with your heart rather than using your brain.
Moreover
, in foreign countries where people start working at younger , the age they got more skills and more knowledge which do indicate their
intelligence
. On other hand,
success
 is a key to
intelligence
 which illustrate that successful people are intelligent.
For instance
, doctors are the main factor that shows that
success
 is the best measure of
intelligence
, as they study hard for their profession.
Furthermore
,
success
 can
also
 play a major role in some human beings
life
 and gave them more motivation to lead their
life
 in a better
way
. To sum up, according to me there are many factors like hard work, wisdom and love, which shows
intelligence
 rather than just being successful in
life
.
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