The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give information about the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen
Island
, according to
a tourist poll
According to
tourist
poll, Bowen Correct article usage
a tourist
Island
has attracted them
Correct pronoun usage
apply
by
the 2 most special Change preposition
apply
things
are
the scenery and the Unnecessary verb
apply
people
with 35 and 42 percent
respectively. The proportion of Change the spelling
per cent
people
who feel satisfied with their accommodation is about 11 percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
this
as
an advantage. It has 12 Correct your spelling
is
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
think that culture
of the Correct article usage
the culture
island
is an essential attraction.
However
, there are few
Correct article usage
a few
things
that affect tourist satisfaction, especially is high
cost of living Add an article
the high
with
50 Change preposition
at
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Besides
, the authorities were not taken responsibility for the entertainment, that
must be a huge omission. 10 and 15 Correct pronoun usage
which
percent
is the worst number for Change the spelling
per cent
two
Correct article usage
the two
remain
Wrong verb form
remaining
things
: weather and food quality. So that this
island
must have changed a lot in the future.
In conclusion, I believe that most people
like Bowen Island
because of the people
and the scenery. However
, there should be some things
that need to be changed such
as the cost of living is
too high or the quality of the food Wrong verb form
being
is
so bad.Wrong verb form
being
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