Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. What problems are associated with this trend? What are some possible solutions?
In these
days it's quite common that Change preposition
These
the
individuals are getting married and have kids in their thirties. For these Correct article usage
apply
people
they have many reasons among them Add a comma
,people
main
problem is they wanted to get settle better in the society and Correct article usage
the main
in addition
to Linking Words
this
even Linking Words
women
is behind for their individual Use synonyms
carrer
.Correct your spelling
career
carrier
This
essay will discuss these problem scenario's, by considering opinion from both sides by using examples of Oxford University research and Time Magazine survey to demonstrate both points and support the claims.
On one hand, Linking Words
this
generation youngsters imagine, marriage is a responsibility so before, getting married they wanted to settle in their own stream. Linking Words
Furthermore
, some people think it might even they might lose their freedom. Linking Words
For example
, Oxford University has conducted Linking Words
a
research in 2018 more than 90% of youth Correct article usage
apply
agree
Add the preposition
onagree
toagree
withagree
this
point and support Linking Words
this
statement. So, from Linking Words
this
example, it is clear that youth are not keen to get married before proper settlement.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, especially Linking Words
women
of Use synonyms
this
generation think, career Linking Words
first
marriage Linking Words
next
, Linking Words
women
these days completing with men and Use synonyms
succeding
in every aspect of life. Correct your spelling
succeeding
Additionally
, Linking Words
women
Use synonyms
has
become matured enough to choose at what age they are fit enough to give childbirth. Change the verb form
have
Similarly
, a survey of Time Magazine in 2019 has conducted in many parts of Linking Words
world
nearly 95% Correct article usage
the world
Use synonyms
women
Change preposition
of women
has
Change the verb form
have
aggreed
to Correct your spelling
agreed
this
point. So, Linking Words
Linking Words
similarly
it is clear that they are behind their career rather than marriage.
To conclude, youth has a clear mindset on their goals and Add a comma
,similarly
marraige
. Correct your spelling
marriage
Moreover
, Linking Words
women
Use synonyms
has
keen knowledge in giving birth to a kid. Change the verb form
have
Finally
, a solution I can say is to get married at 27 age have Linking Words
child
by 30 that will give space to enjoy with your kids and goals.Add an article
a child
Submitted by sathwik.enukonda on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...