Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion?

The current

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is investing more in solar system research to find another living planet and the

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being invested is very huge. Some people say that it is required to know what is the other side of the

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and few argue that the cost can be turned to other important areas. I support the currency spent on

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exploration and

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essay.

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, from the birth of the earth, humans are trying to understand how the outside

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looks like and many well-developed countries have invested millions of dollars towards the work.

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,as centuries are passed and now due to overpopulation on the earth, It is really required to analyse and find if there is any other planet which is suitable for living. In order to know the feasible conditions like Air, water resources and how soil is good for farming

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analysis is

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.

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, without putting

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it is highly not possible to build

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rockets

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are too high in cost.

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, a few years ago, India has invested crores of

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in the mission named "Chandrayan".

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, to predict the weather conditions and alarm the people, so far thousands of rockets have been sent

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outside the

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to read and send

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pictures of our planet. To put it in

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way, establishing satellite communications will help in avoiding climate disasters like cyclones and earthquakes.

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, by sending these

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crafts, we can

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identify the mines on earth so the governments can be beneficial.

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, with the advancement of

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technology, now nations can alert their people and save many lives

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to saving

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. To conclude, even though it is very expensive, it is good to spend

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on

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exploration which will be benefited to countries in many ways.

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,

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recommend the governments to keep continue with

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expenditure.