Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion?

The current
world
is investing more in solar system research to find another living planet and the
money
being invested is very huge. Some people say that it is required to know what is the other side of the
world
and few argue that the cost can be turned to other important areas. I support the currency spent on
space
exploration and
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will furnish my view in
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essay.
Firstly
, from the birth of the earth, humans are trying to understand how the outside
world
looks like and many well-developed countries have invested millions of dollars towards the work.
Moreover
,as centuries are passed and now due to overpopulation on the earth, It is really required to analyse and find if there is any other planet which is suitable for living. In order to know the feasible conditions like Air, water resources and how soil is good for farming
this
analysis is
must
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.
Hence
, without putting
money
it is highly not possible to build
space
rockets
which
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are too high in cost.
For example
, a few years ago, India has invested crores of
money
in the mission named "Chandrayan".
On the other hand
, to predict the weather conditions and alarm the people, so far thousands of rockets have been sent
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outside the
world
to read and send
the
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pictures of our planet. To put it in
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way, establishing satellite communications will help in avoiding climate disasters like cyclones and earthquakes.
Also
, by sending these
space
crafts, we can
also
identify the mines on earth so the governments can be beneficial.
For instance
, with the advancement of
space
technology, now nations can alert their people and save many lives
in addition
to saving
money
. To conclude, even though it is very expensive, it is good to spend
money
on
space
exploration which will be benefited to countries in many ways.
Thus
,
i
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recommend the governments to keep continue with
this
expenditure.
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