Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some that online reading
materials
are better for educating
children
, while others think that
materials
on paper should be used for educational purposes.
This
essay will discuss both views and explain why I think that
children
should use online
materials
for learning. On the one hand, online
materials
provide better accessibility. Almost every family has an access to a computer and the Internet, meaning that any educational reading
materials
may be found at any convenient time. Being able to found quickly the topic of interest lead to better performance during the
study
as
children
do not
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their concentration.
In addition
, as webpages can be adjustable by font size,
children
do not have problems with their vision and the tension in their eyes by the end of the
study
. So convenient access to
materials
and individually adjustable fonts make some people think that online is a better way for
children
to
study
.
On the other hand
,
children
who use printed
materials
are found less distractive and more concentrated on their education. Indeed, having a particular printed topic in their hands, they simply cannot read anything else other than educational
materials
.
This
approach can be found more productive in educating
children
.
Also
, for some of
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tactile sensation helps in being more focused on
study
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,
thus
they perceive information better when they have a book in their hand. In my opinion, online
materials
are far way better rather than printed. I believe that being able to set up a webpage appropriately using different fonts and
colors
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for a
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reading and find educational information easily at any time improve learning for
children
. In conclusion,
although
some people believe that having printed
materials
helps
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children
to stay more focused on their subjects, I believe that
such
advantages as accessibility and adjustability of online
materials
make it more suitable for educating
children
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online reading materials
  • printed materials
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • technology
  • convenience
  • interactivity
  • accessibility
  • visual appeal
  • physical books
  • parental guidance
  • digital skills
  • screen time
  • learning experience
  • personal preference
  • comprehension
  • critical thinking
  • creativity
  • word recognition
  • grammar
  • vocabulary development
  • reading habits
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