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Communication and Personality Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

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Some individuals fail in
school
, while they are being successful in end up the
life
. I completely agree with that statement because human beings have
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a
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different kind of
talents
. I will explain below the paragraphs.
To begin
 with, some individuals have disparity types of abilities and subject knowledge,
such
 as music, sports, and charity activities.
For example
, the Indian cricket player Sachin Tendulkar was loosed academic carrier in
school
, while he was the best player in the Indian cricket team.
Moreover
, the
talents
 are different from
person
 to
person
 but some
people
 compare among their self.
Also
, some human beings have a few hidden
talents
 that depend on the family background,
such
 as musician’s son become a musician as well doctor, dancer, and engineer.
In addition
, some
people
 who are always happy with others friends and relations, succeed in
life
.
Besides
, those who have only one aim and ambition are successes.
Furthermore
, the handwork is an important factor for the
life
 in order to develop their lifestyle, to elevate their knowledge, to become rich persons in the society and to increase their confidence. To sum up,
talents
 and knowledge are different from
person
 to
person
, while some individual
succeed
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 in
school
life
 but others fail.
As a result
, every human beings success their
life
 but some
people
 become a famous
person
. In my opinion,
school
 education is a vitally important factor for each
people
. It is not decided the
people
’s
life
 success or failure.
Similarly
, the environment is another key factor for the
life
.
Also
, the urban area’s
people
 are well-talented compare to rural area’s individuals.
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