Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

Education is a continuous process
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aids learning, acquiring knowledge and skills to one's character. Learning an optional course like
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age is much convenient and could help to enhance children allround rating in
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. I
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oppose
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because of tough competition and choosing
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to the interest needs to
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in mind.
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Initially
, Students
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have to face stiff competition for
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exam to
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studies after schools. To get admission in top colleges require continuous effort starting at an early age in order to crack the entrance exam if
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additional subjects like
arts
were made
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could distract the focus of students from their primary subjects.
For example
,
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exam is hard to crack
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candidates start their preparation from
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class and focus on clearing their concept in science and maths if
arts
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for them their schedule will be disturbed and could impact their output.
Hence
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needs to be focused to prepare the upcoming generation for future prospects.
Moreover
, Every person has different choices with specific interest and it is always advisable to choose a profession in which one
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the passion. If a
subject
is forced on them it could lead to
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downgrade in their result
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add stress in their life.
For instance
, If a sportsperson was told to attend an
arts
and craft class could hamper the performance due to lack of focus and distraction.
Therefore
, For a
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career and satisfaction in life field of interest plays a major role as people find themself comfortable and passionate
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their work. To conclude, every
subject
has its own benefits which may improve the overall performance but a focussed
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curriculum
need to be devised with an approach of understanding the need of students so an option should be provided rather than obligating to opt a particular
subject
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Critical thinking
  • Motor skills
  • Creativity
  • Perspectives
  • Emotional outlet
  • Cultural appreciation
  • Global awareness
  • Historical art movements
  • Spatial intelligence
  • Curriculum overload
  • Non-competitive
  • Exposure
  • Cross-disciplinary benefits
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