Using computer every day can have more negatives than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?

The effect of the
computer
on a young youngster is a debatable topic. A good ratio of people thinks that using a
computer
on a daily basis effect bad than good. I completely agree with
this
opinion and think that sitting in front of the
computer
every single day effect negative on children.
To begin
with, every child play games on the
computer
, watch Youtube and it's quite normal but if
this
habit gets out of control
then
it affects very badly on the baby. If a young kid watch too much youtube and play games every day his eyes can get damage. Because of
this
habit In most cases, child face poor visibility for far distance and have to wear distance glasses.
For example
, in my ,childhood I use to play many games on my
computer
every single day and after 2-3 year my eyes get poor and poor visibility, I started getting difficulty in reading words from far away and have to wear distance glasses. In short, using the
computer
too much affect your eyes. Movermore, through the
computer
, a toddler can access the
internet
also
, but when children watch videos on the
internet
about different things they
also
started doing that. when infant saw any new thing they always want to try that.
For instance
, my friends used to watch WWE ( World Wide Entertainment) after watching fighting in that show he tried to jump from the 1st floor on the table luckily he did not die but he broke his two legs and have to rest for 6 months in the bed.
Thus
, when young juvenile watch videos on the
internet
they want to try that without think of the end result. To recapitulate, the above data I strongly believe using too much
computer
by young children have negative effects on them like getting poor visibility and doing a thing which they saw in videos on the
internet
with thinking of anything.
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