You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it didn't work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help. Write a letter to the company and in your letter: -introduce yourself; -explain the problem; -and state what action you would like from the company.
Dear Madam,
I am writing to complain on account of my
previos
Correct your spelling
previous
week
purchase from your store.
It is Jessica Murphy who is writing Change noun form
week's
this
complaint. Last
week I purchased Smart TV
32 from Artel company. Because of th
utmost courtesy Correct your spelling
the
by
the staff I decided to buy from your company.
When I returned home, I turned on the television and saw that the screen Change preposition
of
didn't
even brightened. I thought that it was regarding the electricity in my house. Verb problem
hadn't
However
, I lately
realised that there Rephrase
recently
are
adequate electricity for Change the verb form
is
TV
. I asked Add an article
a favor
favor
from my neighbour who is good at understanding technologies like Change the spelling
favour
TV
or others. He said that there is
some problems related to Change the verb form
are
TV
which should be said by staff. After that I contacted with
your customer Change preposition
apply
serviceand
Correct your spelling
service and
said
about the issue. Verb problem
talked
However
, I have not received any profitable service yet.
Considering the reputation of your store, I hope I will be satisfied at the earliest convenience. I do not want you to repair it for me. I have longing
Change the verb form
longed
for exchanging
it with another novelChange preposition
to exchange
one
.
Yours faithfully,
Jessica Murphy.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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The letter addresses all parts of the task, providing clear details about the problem and the desired solution.
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The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for a formal complaint.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a logical structure with a clear introduction, explanation of the problem, and a request for action.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite