You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it didn't work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help. Write a letter to the company and in your letter: -introduce yourself; -explain the problem; -and state what action you would like from the company.

Dear Madam, I am writing to complain on account of my
previos
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previous
week
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purchase from your store. It is Jessica Murphy who is writing
this
complaint.
Last
week I purchased Smart
TV
32 from Artel company. Because of
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the
utmost courtesy
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the staff I decided to buy from your company. When I returned home, I turned on the television and saw that the screen
didn't
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even brightened. I thought that it was regarding the electricity in my house.
However
, I
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realised that there
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adequate electricity for
TV
. I asked
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from my neighbour who is good at understanding technologies like
TV
or others. He said that there
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some problems related to
TV
which should be said by staff. After that I contacted
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your customer
serviceand
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service and
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about the issue.
However
, I have not received any profitable service yet. Considering the reputation of your store, I hope I will be satisfied at the earliest convenience. I do not want you to repair it for me. I have
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for exchanging
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it with another novel
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. Yours faithfully, Jessica Murphy.
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The letter addresses all parts of the task, providing clear details about the problem and the desired solution.
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The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for a formal complaint.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a logical structure with a clear introduction, explanation of the problem, and a request for action.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • purchase
  • malfunction
  • customer service
  • report
  • issue
  • resolve
  • rectify
  • defective
  • replacement
  • refund
  • repair
  • assistance
  • urgent
  • unsatisfactory
  • account
  • details
  • response
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