Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people consider that the loss of individual species of flora and fauna is the main environmental problem in

this

modern world but for others, environmental issues are harmful effects of human activities on the biophysical environment. Environmental protection is a process of protecting

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nature on the individual, organizational and governmental level for the benefit of us. Survival of the fittest is nature’s way of ruthlessly allowing weaker specimens to die out,

although

mankind has

also

contributed to falling numbers of

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through hunting and poaching. Attempts to preserve rare and dying species are carried out in zoos or other specialist plant nursery, through the process of breeding programs, preservation, asexual plant propagation, etc. and there was genuine sadness among many when the

last

white rhino died in 2018.

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environmental protection is debatable as climate change and excessive use of

plastic

are two major problems that deserve our attention. The effect of climate change is causing

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of consequence

such

as rising sea level which is associated with flooding of low-level land and gradually shrinking of

habitable

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area of many countries and island communities. Another factor

such

as, ozone layer depletion causes increased UV radiation levels at the earth’s surface, which has negative effects on human health

for example

skin cancer, immunity deficiency etc. If the major contributors to climate change will not support the reduction of greenhouse gases, there is

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little hope for the future. Naturalist

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begun to expose the serious problems causing

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discarded

plastic

waste. Every year a large number of birds and animal are dying through being trapped or caught up in

plastic

bags or ropes.

These

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plastic

waste requires

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process to decay which means

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will remain

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a threat for many years.

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example

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sea creature

are

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gulping small

plastic

particles that we humans are throwing at the beaches or sea, which affects them as well as all other creature in the same food chain. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the loss of particular and rare species of plants and animals are not major environmental issues. To fix the real problems many

environmentalist

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have came up with new ideas like minimalistic and

zero waste

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lifestyle, which in long run will ensure to maintain the life balance on earth.