Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen & sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is argued that
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are ignoring the wrong
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doing by famous
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personalities during the game and in society. I disagree with
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idea because ignoring these small faults will encourage to do bigger and these persons should have proper behaviour because they are role model for the young generation. On the one hand, justifying the wrong
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doing by
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persons will lead to larger problems. We have experience about what happened to many popular
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who destroyed their career themselves by choosing the wrong
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.
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, lots of famous
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addicted to drugs, illegal activities and still spending time in jail or some are killed themselves. If society accepts or praise all the bad
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these
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doing, it encourages them to do again and again and it will damage to those
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's career.
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, a lot of youngsters following these
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as their role model. Young
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are very fond of their ideal
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person and always following their actions which of those are wrong or right. So
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doing some inappropriate behaviour in or out of the game will be affected to these children and they are taking those
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seriously .
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, recently many football
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are rejecting carbonated drink in public and a lot of young
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are leaving them. In conclusion, it is often pointed out that
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take no action about
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person's misbehaviour on or off the game. I disagreed with the statement and these
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should behave at their best
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every time because they are being followed by many
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • misbehave
  • professional sportsmen
  • role model
  • public figures
  • influence
  • performance
  • moral standards
  • media scrutiny
  • endorsements
  • personal brand
  • consistency
  • punishment
  • redemption
  • integrity
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