It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is concerning to many
people
that living in an urban area has a lot of opportunities in their social lives, even if it is a great condition to live in peace in a village. The two sides of the issue will be analyzed before a conclusion, quite reasonable, is found. On the one hand, some
people
argue that city life is better than country life. Because
,
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many types of big companies operate in the city; whichever job you choose is open for
this
area and has a reasonable salary. The opportunity to learn according to your interests is open in all respects;
furthermore
, meeting new
people
who can learn the same thing.
In addition
, the living cost is high. Inasmuch it has better infrastructure, living there is convenient. Traditionally, groups around the world have ascertained that being in the countryside was good for health and the basement of
well being
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life. Suburban areas have more than fresh air, soil and less water pollution. The cause of soil contamination is a lot of
people
living together in one place. Perhaps the countryside did not have industries, there was fresh air and water.
In addition
, the fundamentals of healthy living
is
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organic food
that is
easy to access in the village.
For example
, natural fresh vegetables, grains and meat, milk of animal origin products etc. In conclusion, both city centres and regional areas can provide happiness for individuals.
However
, a person should choose where to live in suitable conditions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • metropolitan
  • infrastructure
  • cosmopolitan
  • commute
  • sociocultural
  • prosperity
  • sustainability
  • rural
  • tranquility
  • urbanization
  • relocation
  • residential
  • populace
  • ecological footprint
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