It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is concerning to many

people

that living in an urban area has a lot of opportunities in their social lives, even if it is a great condition to live in peace in a village. The two sides of the issue will be analyzed before a conclusion, quite reasonable, is found. On the one hand, some

people

argue that city life is better than country life. Because

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many types of big companies operate in the city; whichever job you choose is open for

this

area and has a reasonable salary. The opportunity to learn according to your interests is open in all respects;

furthermore

, meeting new

people

who can learn the same thing.

In addition

, the living cost is high. Inasmuch it has better infrastructure, living there is convenient. Traditionally, groups around the world have ascertained that being in the countryside was good for health and the basement of

well being

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life. Suburban areas have more than fresh air, soil and less water pollution. The cause of soil contamination is a lot of

people

living together in one place. Perhaps the countryside did not have industries, there was fresh air and water.

In addition

, the fundamentals of healthy living

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organic food

that is

easy to access in the village.

For example

, natural fresh vegetables, grains and meat, milk of animal origin products etc. In conclusion, both city centres and regional areas can provide happiness for individuals.

However

, a person should choose where to live in suitable conditions.

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4 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

7.5

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Relevant & specific examples

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