Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Numerous attempts of

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apply

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good

producers

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to promote awareness of their products lead to advertisements

to appear

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everywhere and become an essential part of today's world. Some people even argue that

advitising

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advertising

brings an immense amount of benefits to us. I totally agree with

this

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point of view and believe that efforts to increase the use of

certain

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the certain

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product

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very advantageous.

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of all,

advirtising

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advertising

prevents any

perspective

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prospective

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business from being unknown. Alternatively speaking ,all the interesting and newly produced products will

guaranteely

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guarantee

guaranteed

tested and assessed by the consumers albeit it entails some labour.

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, the world will always be aware of every innovative

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that some people

produces

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, without

advirtisiments

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

263 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

informative
engages
creative
art form
consumerism
materialism
misleading
exaggerating
vulnerable
unrealistic
body image expectations
competitive
economical
targeted ads
personalized ads
intrusive

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Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write a letter to landlord about the one or two problems you have in the house you moved to before 15 days with your family. What are issues and tell what you want him to do.

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In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?