Tourists hardly visit museums in most of the countries. What could be the probable reasons, what steps should be taken by the government to attract more tourist.
Museums
preserve the ancient and valuable objects that are considered important by a country. In the contemporary world, people visiting other countries want robust entertainment, which is enjoyable for them. Use synonyms
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essay will narrate two key factors behind the decline in visits to tourism and Linking Words
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suggest some steps, which can prove as an incentive for overseas visitors.
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Firstly
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offer very little entertainment and have Use synonyms
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very limited attendance. The whole concept of Remove the article
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needs to be revolutionized. Foreigners are hardly interested in watching the history of a country. By adding new features like a cinema, live music, theatre performances more local and foreign people can be attracted. Use synonyms
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of Lahore, Pakistan offered only seeing historical artefacts preserved in a building, recently, a park was built around it, the new cafeteria was added with local delicacies, which, in turn, resulted in a high volume of foreign tourist.
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are mostly owned by the state or federal governments' and these governments do not spend money and effort in advertising these places on their websites. If respective governments take foreign diplomats and dignitaries on Use synonyms
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will promote their culture and advertise their Linking Words
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in Germany are an example of them. Germany preserved the concentration camps from the Nazi period and tourists from around the world visit Germany to see them.
To conclude, the decline in visits to the Use synonyms
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is because they offer little and not properly advertised. By adding new features and proactive advertisement we can attract more travellers to the Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite