You have recently moved into company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department. In the letter, mention: • A brief description of your accommodation. • What problems are you facing? • What do you expect the company to do about it?

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Dear Sir I am writing

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letter to express my concern about the accommodation provided by the company. I have moved in with my family

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month. I am thankful to you for a fully furnished flat with a spacious kitchen and balcony with an amazing city view.

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, I am facing few issues in my apartment which requires your kind attention.

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, the Air conditioner has stopped working for 2 days. As it is summer, we are unable to tolerate the heat as we are staying on the 3rd floor.

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, the washing machine plug needs to be replaced as it is broken before we arrived. We have requested the apartment owner’s multiple times to look at the issue but there was no proper response. I hope that you will address my problem by talking to the leasing office and help me in resolving the issue as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely

SINDHUTue Jun 22 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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6 paragraphs

160 words

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