Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
It is been debatable that
childhood
memories before children
start elementary school have the most crucial on the future, while
others say that the teenage era is more essential. However
, in this
essay, I tend to agree that both of them are important and I will elaborate it both views.
To begin
with, there are several reasons why the childhood
era can make the biggest impact towards children
. Firstly
, they start to figure out how to be a human, this
is the phase where they learn how to think, talk, act and write. For instance
, the survey conducted by the Children
Institution of Indonesia in 2022, said that 60% of kids taught how to talk at age 3 have a better way of communicating than children
who get the lesson talk at age 6. Secondly
, childhood
experience is the moment when children
can express their emotions freely. This
is a good movement because they can laugh, cry, and shout without any concern. Thus
, they will realize that emotions are important and how to respect other people
's feelings.
On the other hand
, teenage time also
plays an important role in people
's lives. First of all, most people
during their teenage life encounter the next journey of feelings, which is love. It is complicated yet so beautiful, that they not only care about themselves but with others. Besides
, numerous people
face hard situations during their teenage, or even failure, this
can direct them to access problem-solving skills and analytical thinking, figuring out that the world is not as stunning as it was, sometimes things we can do are just accept and forgive. Furthermore
, youth conditions can affect adulting in the future.
To sum up
, both childhood
and youth eras are precious for the development of human beings. Childhood
affects teenage time, while
the teenage era affects maturity time as well.Submitted by zefanyagyu on
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