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Nowadays it is very popular to be technology/internet literate. Some people say that these skills will replace the use of books as main source of information and entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?

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The advancement in
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technology provides easy access to the internet and it is famous now learning online.Some people believe that virtual study is the primary source of data and enjoy which
also
 eliminates reading physical
books
.I totally disagree with
this
 statement as there are enormous benefits with printed material and those can not be met using internet study.
To begin
 with,reading a book gives a lot of pleasure and improves readers concentration.
In other words
,people who often read
books
 will never feel stress rather they will be more focused on the content.
For example
, while I was preparing for
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 exam,I studied different
books
 with high attention and felt comfortable as well.Another point to add,the source of information is reliable in
books
 as they are authentic before they are being published and
this
 is the key problem with online material. Continuing the learning online gives more strain on
eyes
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 and that leads to some sight problems.
For instance
, a previous study discovered that the growth in eye problems are due to more time spent on computers and other gadgets.
Moreover
,while learning online and saving information on devices can be a problem when a device is crashed as we cannot restore all the stored data.And
this
 problem of losing information is never going to happen with a physical book.
In addition
 to these, online learning requires a lot of power consumption that increases the demand for electricity. In conclusion,though there are some benefits with online literature,
however
, the other problems are more severe.
On the other hand
,using
books
 not only gives joy but
also
 provides trustable content.
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