Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other while other think that people have become more independent.discuss both views and give your opinion.
People
have different views about whether we are more dependent on each other. While others believe nowadays Use synonyms
people
are more independent, Use synonyms
i
think most of the society is dependent on other society.
On the one hand, in ancient part public was too much dependent on rich family and landlord but Change the capitalization
I
few
decades ago the scenery has been changed. In Change the article
a few
,
Correct article usage
the,past
past
most humans are illiterate, so that they are very much dependent on the rich class. But at present majority number of the nation are educated. So that they do the job under private companies or government service. In the modern Change preposition
apply
world
community's are not dependent but every single provincial dependent on each other. For Use synonyms
example
most of the Add a comma
,example
country
exported oil from the middle east of the Use synonyms
world
like Saudi Use synonyms
Arab
, the UAE, Iran etc. Without export oil from those Correct your spelling
Arabia
country
others bucolic's are totally immovable, Use synonyms
similarly
some nation's export electric machine and vehicles from China,Japan,the UK and so on ,Linking Words
Also
some Linking Words
first
-Linking Words
classclass
Correct your spelling
class class
country
sent money and food help to the poor Use synonyms
country
. So it can be said globally Use synonyms
people
's are dependent on each other.
public certainly more independent on their personal life.Use synonyms
For example
, in Linking Words
Linking Words
first-
Add an article
the first-classclass
a first-classclass
classclass
Correct your spelling
class class
Use synonyms
world
like the USA, the UK, China, Japan, and many Change the noun form
worlds
others
European Correct quantifier usage
other
country
Use synonyms
people
are much more independent. They can do anything in their personal life without a break the government role. The main reason for Use synonyms
this
, most of the homey are independent. So common society is totally free. The rich class community can travel anywhere Linking Words
of
the Change preposition
in
world
at the same time they can choose their favourite job. Their children are Use synonyms
also
easygoing.
In conclusion, most of the Linking Words
country
are dependent on each other but the majority portion of Use synonyms
people
are independent in their personal life.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite