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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

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The diven diagrams illustrate the home designs according to
climate
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. It is apparent that houses are in a cool
climate
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 have different kind of roof and materials than those in a warm
climate
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.
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, the number of windows and their design
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 differ from each other. Regarding the homes in a colder place, they have a high-angled roof to allow sunlight enter to the
house
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 through the window; whereas, in the warm
climate
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, homes are designed with a peak angle in the middle and some extra roof on each side of a
house
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 to render the shade.
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, the building materials and insulation are used in the houses of cool
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 to keep it warm;
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, external insulation and reflective materials are for a warm
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 to keep heat out.
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, the cool
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house
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 has only one window which faces the direction of the sun, while the warm
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house
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 has windows on two sides that are shaded away from the sun. By opening the window at night, the stored heat can be removed by the ventilation process.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • automation
  • robotics
  • futuristic developments
  • analyze data
  • analytical precision
  • human capabilities
  • emotional intelligence
  • human interaction
  • human oversight
  • strategic decision-making
  • nuances of human judgment
  • technological landscape
  • intrinsic human qualities
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