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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is predicted that printed
newspapers
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 and
books
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 will be supplanted by their online versions, which will be able to be accessed without paying. In my opinion,
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 I agree that printed
newspapers
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 and
books
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 will gradually disappear due to the convenience of modern technology, I believe that
readers
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 need to pay to read. Many people will incline towards online editions of
newspapers
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 and
books
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 because of the convenience it brings. It means that individuals do not need to bring along a huge newspaper or a thick book since they can read on their own portable and small devices
such
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 as smartphones, which is an indispensable part of people’s lives.
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, many
books
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 nowadays are available to be downloaded in the version of PDF or EPUB, and
newspapers
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 can be read directly on the publishers’ websites on their own phones.
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 will facilitate the knowledge-acquiring process as students or workers have the ability to read while they commute to their
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 institutions or workplaces. As a consequence, they will have more time to concentrate on their study or work and boost their productivity.
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, I disagree with the view that people can read without purchasing because it will make their source of information less accurate and lead to the degradation of the general quality of authors’ lives.
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 of all, when publishers do not force their
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 to pay monthly or annual subscription fees, they will have less revenue.
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, they do not have an adequate amount of money to recruit professional journalists, resulting in
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less informative and accurate articles, which may baffle the
readers
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.
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, writing and publishing
books
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 is the only way for
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authors to earn their living. If people read
books
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 without paying, the authors could not make their ends meet.
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,
this
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 will decrease their living standard and cause them to give up their job. In conclusion,
although
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 online versions of
newspapers
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 and
books
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 will gain popularity because of
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 convenience, I think
readers
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 should not read without purchasing since it negatively affects the publishers and the authors. Governments and organizations should take concerted actions to avoid the act of reading ebooks and

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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