27. Many people believe that majority of children in western countries are being obese. Is it true? Agree or disagree. Give reasons and examples.
It is very much true that in most of the western countries young generation kids are having these challenges with their overweight body.
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, a fair amount of people believes that in developed countries children are having more health-related issues due to Linking Words
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is one of the regular issues for them.
To embark on, the overweight is one of the most dangerous issues to all developed nations kids. Linking Words
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, if we look into western countries feed habits and their lifestyle are very much complex and these are critical factors which led to gain overweight during a young age only. Linking Words
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, the way food manufacturing companies showcase their sales promotions and offers are attracting the youth and students to have junk and oil food too. Linking Words
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, parents are busy with their regular busy schedules eventually the whole family would prefer to have snack outside only. As per recent Google survey findings, 95% of western families are opting for junk food from outside foodcourts which is the primary factor of Linking Words
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, giving 90% of investment support along with some tax benefits and Linking Words
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but not least, enabling some paly areas with sports parks may help them to reduce the overweight concern.
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