In the future it will become more difficult to live on Earth so more money should be spent researching how to live on other planets such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Living on
Earth
is becoming more challenging daily, especially for the future
. Therefore
, it is believed that more investments need to be made to investigate life
in
other planets like Mars. Change preposition
on
Although
I strongly defend that more investment should be designated to researches, there are other priorities to investigate than life
outside the Earth
. Then
, I strongly disagree with the prompt and in this
essay, I will defend my opinion.
To begin
with, living on Earth
is indeed struggling and the focus of governments need to be on what they have outlined as a fact not relying on a hypothesis,
because Remove the comma
apply
life
in
another planet is totally unreliable. An important illustration Change preposition
on
to
Change preposition
of
that is
regarding of
waste. It is a fact that more garbage is being produced by human beingsChange preposition
apply
,
because they lack strong recycle policies in Remove the comma
apply
majority
of countries and in some, they do not even exist. Add an article
the majority
Consequently
, the garbage accumulated provide
several drawbacks worldwide. Change the verb form
provides
As a result
, the government of each nation ought to invest more money in how to improve life
on Earth
not investigating life
in
Change preposition
on
other planet
.
Another important point is that each nation should drive their efforts to investigate more the planet where they liveChange the wording
another planet
other planets
,
because it can bring more quality of Remove the comma
apply
life
in the future
. Several universities in the world are capable of doing a
deep research into genetics and Remove the article
apply
human
brain, Correct article usage
the human
for instance
, then
, more prepared will be the society for the future
if a disease appears. Knowledge is undeniably important, however
it must provide benefit for those who sponsor these studies and certainly, Add the comma(s)
,however
population
prefer having their money invested Correct article usage
the population
on
Change preposition
in
better
understanding of their species than others Add an article
a better
in
Mars, Change preposition
on
for example
.
To conclude, I totally agree that money should be given to researches to prevent some difficult situations in the future
. However
, the focus needs to be on what a
society can directly profit from, Remove the article
apply
such
as having a better quality of life
with less rubbish or even acquiring knowledge of their human body. I believe it is pointless to investigate life
in other country
.Change the wording
another country
other countries
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