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Most countries have traditional celebrations that occur annually. In your opinion, what benefits do these celebrations have for society? Support your opinion with reasons and example from your own Knowledge and experience.

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Tradition is a belief,
behavior
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, and custom inherited from the past, which either has symbolic meanings or significant importance to society.
Therefore
, a great deal of traditional events is celebrated annually around the globe.
However
, the more modern our world becomes, the more these special festivals degenerated.
This
 problem can obliterate the many benefits traditional
celebrations
 have brought about to one's society.
Celebrations
 of culture provide individuals
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sense of identity. They not only answer the question of citizens' origins but they
also
 remind citizens of what or who have shaped their lives. The
people
 in my country, Vietnam,
for instance
, take great importance in celebrating the Hung King Temple festival. In
this
 special event, everyone will commemorate Hung Kings-the founder of the Vietnam nation and after that, getting involved in a diversity of folk games
such
 as bamboo swing, rice cooking competitions, or lion dance.
Vietnamese
people
 are reminded that owing to Hung Kings' efforts and
labors
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, they are able to lead a well-of life in
this
 day and age. Another sizeable value of cultural
celebrations
 is that they educate us on things like freedom and benevolence, and help us pass on our cultural or religious history. In
this
 aspect,
Vietnamese
people
 have
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Going
Giong
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 Festival, which is to commemorate Saint Giong, one of the four
Vietnamese
 immortals.
This
 event helps us remember the heroin battle of Saint Giong and his
people
, Van Lang, against foreign enemies in order to protect
Vietnamese
's freedom and rights. To summarize, no matter how diverse traditional
celebrations
 are, they all serve the same purpose: being the underpinning of one's society.
Thus
, disregarding them can bring about severe problems and disadvantages.
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