Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence
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What to write in a newspaper and what to cast on television is the choice of columnists. I believe that their reports are predominantly influenced by politicians and far behind reality. Admittedly, it is true that news channels and newspapers are massive sources to circulate crucial information in a wide range of fields like education, business, trade, weather and whatnot. many of them are realistic and point
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positivity in society. To summarize, In my point of view, there should be a governing body established to overview all these broadcast editors and their articles, who can take action against them if something bogus is published.Submitted by MK on
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