Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence

What to write in a newspaper and what to cast on television is the choice of columnists. I believe that their reports are predominantly influenced by politicians and far behind reality. Admittedly, it is true that news channels and newspapers are massive sources to circulate crucial information in a wide range of fields like education, business, trade, weather and whatnot.
However
, I believe recently these sources are highly influenced by politicians and even some of them have been found, having shares in some news channels. News reporters or carrier are being bribed to telecast report in favour or against the ruling parties by the opposition parties. If these reports are not scrutinized in detail by some governing body,
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will be having detrimental results for our future generation. It is true that most of the information conveyed through these media means is negative and disturbing; it is very rare to hear something related to goodness and righteousness . I am
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not in the opinion that all statement reports are false, on one hand many of them are realistic and point outs problems in the society for development and improvements. But
on the other hand
, many of the reporters using
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channel in a negative way and for their self-interest , they publish wrong information. It would be obviously better if we hear more good announcement ;
this
will develop overall positivity in society. To summarize, In my point of view, there should be a governing body established to overview all these broadcast editors and their articles, who can take action against them if something bogus is published.
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