Education for young people is important in many countries. However, the others think government should spend more money for education in adult population who cannot read and write”. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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education is fundamental for young people. Despite

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, the others believe that public institutions should destinate more budget to allow

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population to learn how

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write

and read.

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I agree that educational services should be offered mainly to the teenage community, I think to permit a complete development of a country is important to share these programs among adults. On the one

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, the youth represent the principal source for the growth of a nation. The school system must give

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possibility to improve their skills and let them

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reach their dreams. For

this

reason,

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governments

have to allocate

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amount of money

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this

field because only in

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way will be possible to create a future workforce that may increase the richness of a country.

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instance, in

Italy

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there are many money

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for poor students to let them

to

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apply

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continue their studies after high school and to attend the most prestigious

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universities

following their job

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.

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, to have the

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evolution of

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most of the citizens must know reading and writing.

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because is not

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acceptable

that many adults, especially in the poorest areas of a country

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don't

know

this

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skills.

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situation affects the general wellbeing of a nation because especially in

third

world nations many productivity sectors can evolve and improve their productions because of the missing of educated employees.

For example

, in 1970 is started

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enormous educational programme in Italy that consisted

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the creation of schools in far villages of the nations with the

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purpose

of reducing consistently the number of illiterates providing them

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the items that need to improve their abilities and have a better future. To conclude, though I agree that

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amount of money must

be spend

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for

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the development of knowledge between scholars, I think that another part should be destinate to dramatically reduce

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of adults that still are not able to write and to read because

this

issue

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represent

a big obstacle to the growth of a nation.