some people think governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and hosing problems to help people to prevent illness and disease . to what extent do you agree or disagree?

A fair amount of folks believe that the authorities should concentrate on lowering environmental

pollution

and residential troubles to aid

people

to avert sickness and flu. In my opinion, the authorities of the nation should support in order to help the society from danger.

To begin

with,

pollution

is the common term that our ears are attuned to it.

Pollution

is the prominent reason behind

people

's sickness.

In other words

, in the modern era,

the

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mankind is enjoying

the

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a

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luxurious comfortable life due to

the

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technological developments which

is

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triggering

the

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pollution

levels to

its

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their

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peak.

For example

, the carbon monoxide gas emitted from

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cars is the highest

pollution

ratio across the world. Due to

this

harmful gas, the entire community is affected

with

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health issues.

Thus

, the authorities should strictly impose a rule to ban the luxurious cars which

is

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rising the

pollution

levels in the world.

Furthermore

, there are certain

people

in the world who are suffering from diseases due to poverty. There

is

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no sophisticated hospitals and emergency wards in rural areas. To illustrate

this

, an article in Hindu magazine published that 40 per cent of the

people

are dying due to lack of treatment in the countryside.

Therefore

, the government should increase the facilities

such

as

equipments

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, machines and more beds to accommodate the patients suffering from health problems. To conclude, the government should imply

pollution

-free laws and obligations in order to alleviate the environmental problems and expand the facilities provided in the countryside to help the

people

facing difficulties in health.