It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

It is crucial for kids to learn the difference between right and wrong things at a very young age and

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is required to keep

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on the right path.

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freedom and

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is always a matter of concern.Yet, I believe some

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is necessary to be given for their betterment which I will brief in the following paragraphs.

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and foremost, learning good manners is one of the key aspects of

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's lives as their

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behavioural growth depends on what they learn at age of four or five years.

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,

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and teachers should put their best efforts to learn good qualities which will

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forever.

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,being an individual, yet, I continue to follow the good qualities which were being taught during my primary school.

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,Kids often do mistakes unknowingly and they can be punished non-aggressively either by caretakers or by educators

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too much freedom can mislead them towards the wrong track. Whilst physical

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is not allowed to impose on the youngsters,

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should think of an alternative way of teaching them a lesson as there are bad consequences with physical disciplining.

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,few cases have been reported in a district police station by

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that their young ones are left home after some physical abuse.And on the same fashion, teachers should

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be not allowed to hit

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in any circumstances as there are numerous ways to deal with the students.

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, the maths tutor of the 7th standard in Hodgson middle school stopped sports class for several students due to their low score. In conclusion,in order to educate the

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and make them understand morality and to distinguish between the good and the bad, disciplinary action is required.Having said that neither

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nor teachers should be allowed to give them physical punishments.

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,an emotional

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can be encouraged.