In some countries, there is an increase in the number of parents who educate their children at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, varieties

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are adopted to teaching

children

well. While parental education at

home

has some benefits, the drawbacks outweigh, and a better choice remains to treat it

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supplement to

school

teaching. It is undeniable that homeschooling offers a more personalized construction of academic systems following the

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nature of kids. As for each student, parents know more accurately about their child so that they can offer better educational opportunities.

For example

, when a kid shows

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favor

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towards reading, his parent can concentrate fully on

this

and select proper books to strengthen the interest.

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tailored election in homeschooling definitely responds more precisely to individual strength and weakness, and it can pave the way for

children

’s future academic

behaviors

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. The child-dependent and parent-controlled pattern of

home

teaching is really effective

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improving kids’ performance and should not be abandoned.

However

, knowledge and skills taught by parents at

home

are liable to be limited and not satisfied

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the full development demands of

children

.

Children

may lack

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social contact if they take much time at

home

, and

this

would result in

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poor-developed social skills due to generally insufficient connection with peers. Without encounter people with various cultures, worldviews, and socioeconomic status in a

school

, their spiritual and mental outlook tends to be simple

instead

of well established.

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would be worse in terms of

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academic backgrounds of parents, especially when they have to move

further

to higher-level studies. Unlike

home

-schooling, traditional education at

school

is able to cover problems above and

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the needs both in social skills and for academic integrity. In conclusion,

although

educating

children

at

home

seems to be positive in some aspects, I believe the negative impacts should be paid more attention and it would be more excellent to regard it as an addiction to

school

education.