Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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argument about the
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and students because they are relying on the
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in their
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, and it is containing many negative effects which lead some people to narrow the usage of the
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to the educational purpose. Partially I agree, absolutely there
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many negative
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there is a massive of positive
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which could be helpful for them in their
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small guidance from our side as adults. In
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I will discuss both
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to clarify my opinion. From the
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point of view, the World Wide Web has their drawback and side effects.
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badly on their personalities, their health and
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way of thinking.
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, it contains many dangerous ideas which could lead the students to damage their
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which could destroy their healthiness.
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amazing pages which can guide them to build their skills and know a thousand of information because it
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many best practices in a
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positive
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positive ideas and information related to
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matter in so many sectors. And if we will talk about
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search engine, we can find a massive of data and information about many wonderful things in
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negative and positive
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. And we should take everything in our consideration and try to guide them to the right track.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • independent learning
  • critical thinking
  • excessive reliance
  • hinder
  • crucial
  • problem-solving
  • overly dependent
  • diversity
  • perspectives
  • global cultures
  • enriching
  • unrestricted
  • information overload
  • discerning
  • credible sources
  • incorporation
  • engagement
  • adaptivity
  • personalized learning
  • innovative
  • pedagogy
  • digital age
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