You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent, you have had a wonderful time. You have promised to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion. \ Write a letter to your travel agent as promised, and let him know what you have been doing and what you are going to do before the end of the journey.

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Dear Sir, As promised, I am writing

this

letter to tell you that I love Banff Park, Alberta. Ultimately, its beauty is relentlessly adorable and allure people. I am obliged that you recommended

this

tourist place to me for my holidays. On the first day, after arrival, I stayed in Hotel King. They served me with delicious Chinese cuisine, and I really loved it. For the

last

few days, I have been going to the beach to enjoy and learn surfing. I took a few suffering lessons from an instructor, and he was

also

quite friendly. Today, I have a plan to go river rafting to have some new enjoyable experience. As I have three more days left, I am planning to go to the local market to shop for some accessories as a memory,

along with

this

I have another plan to visit the local museum to gain knowledge related to the history of the region. Thank you again for your recommendation. I will be planning my next trip with your suggestion. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.

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Structure

Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea with corresponding supporting details. Your paragraphs beautifully share your experiences and plans but try to refine the focus on a single idea for enhanced clarity.

Accuracy

Consider reviewing for minor inaccuracies in word choice or grammar that could slightly distract from the clarity of your message (e.g., 'suffering' lessons seems a typo for 'surfing' lessons).

Expression

Your enthusiasm and appreciation for the travel agent's suggestion come through very clearly, which is excellent for the task achievement.

Structure

The structure of your letter, with a clear beginning, body, and conclusion, effectively conveys your message and experiences, contributing positively to both coherence and cohesion.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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