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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion

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While education importance is increasingly popular, they continue to be rather controversial because the benefits are hard to quantify exactly. There are arguments on both sides of
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 topical debate, and I will discuss them now. On the one hand, opponents of the boarding
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 point the when adolescents far from their parents they may do inappropriate things. It is hard to blame them because no one tells them what is right or wrong.
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 concerned about the issue of those who have bad attitude may affect young children.
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, supporters of boarding
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 thought that the skills learned from living alone in
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 improve independence. It appears that day
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 helps children adjust to university life compared to normal
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 highlight the independence and self-motivation that a student will acquire, in areas
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 as time management and interpersonal skills.
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, if students well at organizing time they have more time to spend on a subject and other activities.
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 ability may lead to greater career success later in life.
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, the lessons learned from preparatory
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 not only bounded by a subject
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 valuable life lesson It is logical to conclude that boarding
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 can indeed be a good choice for children, with the experience of self-supporting skills that are invaluable in the future.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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