In some countries, the government pays for health care. In others, the individual must pay for their own health care. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of each system.

Health

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is vital for everyone. When one is sick, he/ she needs to use the

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services. There are widely differing views on the issue of whether the

government

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should be responsible for the public cost or not. In

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essay, I will explore the pros and cons of each system. Living standards can be secured if the policy maker

pay

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for its citizens'

healthcare

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. It is an undeniable

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fact that the cost of

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services is sky-high.

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expenses are financial burdens to less wealthy families.

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the

minium

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wage in Hong Kong is $40 per hour, it requires a patient to work for a minimum of 12 hours in order to afford to get

cure

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a cure

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for simple illnesses, like

cold

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colds

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. Imagine for those who are suffering from serious

sickness

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sicknesses

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,

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as

cancers

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cancer

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, the financial burden will be put on them will be enormous, even

to

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middle class

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families. If the medical expenses can be

transfered

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transferred

to the

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, it is their citizens who can

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most.

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, noticed that the

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's assets come from taxation, the

government

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tends to impose higher taxes

to

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the wealthy ones, in

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case

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businesses when

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its

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expenditure goes up.

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, even though the

government

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takes

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responsible

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of

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its people's

health

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, the bills

are

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always

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up to

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affluent businesses.

Cocurrently

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Currently

,

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health care

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healthcare

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fraud and abuse might occur when individuals do not need to pay for the services which

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resulting

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results

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in a

raise

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on

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tax. By way of conclusion, the drawbacks of having

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government

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the government

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covers

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all of the public's

healthcare

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expenses, in my opinion,

outweight

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outweigh

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of individuals. In order to alleviate the problems,

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of the

government

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covering the fees, I believe that

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a subsidy

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is a better solution.