More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays,

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number

of wild

species

are on the way

of

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extinction

.

Similarly

remaining are on the list of endangered

animals

.

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essay will discuss

deforeststation

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deforestation

and

porching

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poaching

perching

are the key factors responsible for the

extinction

of

species

and

also

provide preventive measures

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aid to support

animals

that are on the edge of

extinction

or in the book endangered. To embark on, the primary factor that

contribute

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to

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wildlife

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wild life

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wildlife

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extinction

is

deforeststation

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deforestation

.

This

means cutting of wild trees gradually lead to

scarecity

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scarcity

of food,

this

would play

crucial

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role in

distrubing

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disturbing

the food chain system.

For instance

, it is evident that all the

animals

depends

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on each other for their

survive

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survival

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.

This

means some

animals

depend on plants,

on the other hand

, others depend on the

plant eating

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plant-eating

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deers and rabbits.

Secondly

,

porching

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poaching

purchasing

perching

is

the

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another agent chich is reported as the cause of killing a large

number

of white tigers in

amazon

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forest.

This

can be

also

considered as a cause of

wipping

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wiping

ripping

whipping

off an animal from

this

planet.

Thus

it is clear that

deforeststation

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deforestation

and illegal animal killing would

acts

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as vital agents which are

responsiable

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responsible

for

extinctioned

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extinction

species

. On the bright side, there ought to be some action to be taken to prevent

this

issue.

Intially

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Initially

, Government should implement a strict rule to prevent cutting of

tress

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trees

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from the forest area.

This

would help flora and

funa

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fauna

fun

to

servive

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service

survive

and

food

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the food

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chain will not get

distrubed

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disturbed

.

Similarly

, there should

also

strict

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enforced laws

such

as penalty, imprisonment for the individuals who hunt

animals

which

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are on the verge of

extinction

.

This

would protect many

animals

to live safely in their inhabitant. In conclusion,

Although

, a large

number

of

animals

are about to die off from the phase of the earth by deforestation and illegal animal killing

,

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if the

goverment

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government

could tackle

this

issues by implementing enforced laws which would aid to save the life of a large

number

of

species