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Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?

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Due to the
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 in the import industry, nations can have various types of eatable products available to them. In my view, it is a positive development but with some serious concern towards economy and environment.
To begin
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 with, people has benefited from an
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 in foreign
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. It helps to provide essential food items to the population, which is not easily cultivated in their region.
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, residents are restricted to only a few nutritious items. The middle east region,
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, with having no agricultural region for the cultivation of nutritional vegetables and fruits. So the dependence grows more on the import from
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such
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 as India and Bangladesh.
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, residents now have greater access to nutritious food, which in turns
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 life expectancy and quality of life. Despite its pros, it can have serious repercussions on the economy and environment. As the nation promote more imported
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 which can have a detrimental
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 on local
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.
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, the local productivity of the nation will be decreased and the country may fall into recession. Another reason is that if the exporting
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 are not in a great situation to fulfil the demand of the other
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, it affects the supply chain to other
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. For instances, India is a major exporter to middle eastern
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 in cultivated foods.
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, when India's production is lowered it has a discernible impact on import-dependent
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. To summarise,
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increase
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 in dependency on imported
goods
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 can have a tremendous benefit on the population but at the same time it can affect the local production and economy

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