Traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. this has negative effects on family and society. To what extend you agree or disagree?

International fast

foods

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as KFC are becoming more and more popular than traditional

foods

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phenomenon is detrimental to

both

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family and

society

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. I agree with

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statement but I think

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trend

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result

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in more

benefits

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than

problems

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. Regarding the drawback, Enjoying more fast

food

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will weaken the cultural

identity

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. Some traditional

foods

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are closely associated with local culture.

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, some

foods

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are special in the Atacama Desert because of the extreme climatic conditions like drought. If these local

foods

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are replaced by

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fast

foods

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, the young generations will

lack

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the understanding of

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impact to some extent.

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, these

problems

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have not

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result

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resulted

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in significant impacts since

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apply

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cultural

identity

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are more dependent on education. Even though

,

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they may

lack

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the

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experience

on

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of

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eating traditional

food

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, they can

also

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know it through learning local history.

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, the

benefits

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are more important for

both

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individual

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and

society

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. It will contribute to economic

growth

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.

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, some fast-

food

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companies

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are likely to build branches or factories if they want to expand their market in some areas, which will create job opportunities for local

people

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, providing them with stable salaries.

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,

people

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will have more disposable money, and they will purchase more products or services to stimulate

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apply

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economic

growth

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.

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, these international

food

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companies

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can increase the revenue of the

government

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because they need to pay taxes.

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, the

government

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will have budgets to better the cityscape, which not only benefit the local residents but

also

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improve the economy through

tourism

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industry.

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, the main reason

of

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for

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choosing fast

food

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is that

people

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want to save

time

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because of their over-busy works.

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, they will have more

time

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to dedicate

into

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to

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working, which will be beneficial for their futural career. In conclusion, the development of fast

foods

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surpassing that of traditional

food

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contributes to economic

growth

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and adapt to

social

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situation

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. While drawbacks do exist,

it

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they

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can be minimized.

foods

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such

Linking Words

as KFC are becoming more and more popular than traditional

foods

Use synonyms

. It is believed that

this

Linking Words

phenomenon is detrimental to

both

Use synonyms

family and

society

Use synonyms

. I agree with

this

Linking Words

statement but I think

this

Linking Words

trend

Use synonyms

result

Change the verb form

results

show examples

in more

benefits

Use synonyms

than

problems

Use synonyms

. Regarding the drawback, Enjoying more fast

food

Use synonyms

will weaken the cultural

identity

Use synonyms

. Some traditional

foods

Use synonyms

are closely associated with local culture.

For example

Linking Words

, some

foods

Use synonyms

are special in the Atacama Desert because of the extreme climatic conditions like drought. If these local

foods

Use synonyms

are replaced by

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

fast

foods

Use synonyms

, the young generations will

lack

Use synonyms

the understanding of

environmental

Add an article

the environmental

show examples

impact to some extent.

Nevertheless

Linking Words

, these

problems

Use synonyms

have not

Use synonyms

result

Change the verb form

resulted

show examples

in significant impacts since

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

cultural

identity

Use synonyms

are more dependent on education. Even though

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

they may

lack

Use synonyms

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

experience

on

Change preposition

of

show examples

eating traditional

food

Use synonyms

, they can

also

Linking Words

know it through learning local history.

However

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, the

benefits

Use synonyms

are more important for

both

Use synonyms

individual

Fix the agreement mistake

individuals

show examples

and

society

Use synonyms

. It will contribute to economic

growth

Use synonyms

.

For instance

Linking Words

, some fast-

food

Use synonyms

companies

Use synonyms

are likely to build branches or factories if they want to expand their market in some areas, which will create job opportunities for local

people

Use synonyms

, providing them with stable salaries.

Therefore

Linking Words

,

people

Use synonyms

will have more disposable money, and they will purchase more products or services to stimulate

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

economic

growth

Use synonyms

.

Moreover

Linking Words

, these international

food

Use synonyms

companies

Use synonyms

can increase the revenue of the

government

Use synonyms

because they need to pay taxes.

Therefore

Linking Words

, the

government

Use synonyms

will have budgets to better the cityscape, which not only benefit the local residents but

also

Linking Words

improve the economy through

tourism

Add an article

the tourism

show examples

industry.

In addition

Linking Words

, the main reason

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

choosing fast

food

Use synonyms

is that

people

Use synonyms

want to save

time

Use synonyms

because of their over-busy works.

Thus

Linking Words

, they will have more

time

Use synonyms

to dedicate

into

Change preposition

to

show examples

working, which will be beneficial for their futural career. In conclusion, the development of fast

foods

Use synonyms

surpassing that of traditional

food

Use synonyms

contributes to economic

growth

Use synonyms

and adapt to

social

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a social

the social

show examples

situation

Fix the agreement mistake

situations

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. While drawbacks do exist,

it

Correct pronoun usage

they

show examples

can be minimized.