A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.

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Exploiting
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is unethical since they are
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had as equal rights as humans have, according to some, but others consider utilizing
animals
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for the existence of mankind is justifiable. In my opinion, even though animal cruelty is unacceptable, using them for medical and eating
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is acceptable to a great degree. On the one hand, those who are arguing animal justices point out that these species
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possess a similar right.
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, they need to be protected not only from killing but pain full procedures
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. When experimenting
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medicines or edibles: mice and pigs are tested to find out the efficacy and side effects before administering these
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humans to avoid possible dangers.
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, If the drugs and eatables directly gave to the human population, the species would extinct from the face of the
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. These supporters advocate under no circumstance, should kill them.
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, the opponents of the
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that certain
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could be used for research.
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, while comparing the
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’ suffering is far better than dying of mankind from deadly diseases and starvation.
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, even the animal activists tend to support the scientific study if their loved one experienced any medical emergencies and required medicines since all the medicines are scientifically tested on
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before administering on humans,
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consideration is viewed as accurate. In conclusion, despite people have different attitudes regarding using organisms for research purpose, I personally think that
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is essential to find new generation medications and food products.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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