The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree?
Nowadays, teenagers adapt to technologies faster than elderly
people
. Personally, Use synonyms
i
think Change the capitalization
I
i
completely agree that they responsible for developments in our Change the capitalization
I
live
.
Replace the word
life
First
of all, as far as know young generation have more motivation to change their Linking Words
live
and world in Replace the word
lives
good
way. Even if we give chance to elderly Change the article
a good
people
they will not work as Use synonyms
a teenagers
, cause of Correct the article-noun agreement
a teenager
teenagers
this
motivation and health. Linking Words
For example
Mark Linking Words
Zuckrberg
Correct your spelling
Zuckerberg
he
is a creator of international messenger under the name Facebook.He create it when he was 24 years old and it was Correct pronoun usage
apply
most
popular app but if we compare now and past Facebook become less popular as Mark become older. That's why Add an article
a most
people
who Use synonyms
is
younger have Change the verb form
are
a
good productivity and thoughts.
Remove the article
apply
Secondly
, young Linking Words
people
do not avoid risk and do not fear Use synonyms
about
their business. What Change preposition
apply
i
mean by Change the capitalization
I
this
it means that they ready to fight with problems face to face and decide it without running or avoid Linking Words
Add an article
the issue
issue
and create new technologies. For instance Fix the agreement mistake
issues
Steave
Jobs Correct your spelling
Steve
he
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
creator
of Add an article
the creator
company
Apple and he has a film about it all. In one moment, he Correct article usage
the company
search
Change the verb form
searches
a
sponsor for his company and he Change preposition
for a
find
one person, he said to Change the verb form
finds
Steave
Correct your spelling
Steve
certain
amount of money but Steve venture and said twice more than Correct article usage
a certain
sponsor
and he Correct article usage
a sponsor
accept
. Change the verb form
accepts
Thus
, prove that risk not always but some times excuse.
To conclude, Linking Words
i
strongly believe that Change the capitalization
I
young
generation can influence to Correct article usage
the young
world
and it Add an article
the world
make
them more motivated.Change the verb form
makes
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite