The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is very much true that good

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is better wealth which can be gained by the high standard of living.

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, a fair amount of the public believes that our

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depends on our quality of

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I totally agree with

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statement and I would like to present some examples. To embark on, a

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-class lifestyle will determine the high quality of our

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, when you have everything in your hand and

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we will get it whenever we need including

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too.

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, during your energy , crisis you may get support from a super high professional doctors team as you have a good lifestyle with a good income in society. And

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but not least, the one who has the quality of heart can go for monthly or yearly medical checkups which may feel them confident and identify if there are any fitness-related issues in advance.

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, conducting ECG yearly will be helpful to identify any sudden heart-related problems. As per recent Google survey findings, 60% of people are having long term

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span than other average people who are not having a good aspect of

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, undoubtedly, there are some challenges even with below poverty community to lead their regular

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as family monthly expenses, kids school fees and many more.

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, their monthly income is very less to look after everything of family regular expenses.

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, 70% of family income will be consumed in the form of house rent and the rest can be used only for their monthly expenses. To sum up, one must be looked after his

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on a daily basis even though busy with office works and assignments.

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, when we have good

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and

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we will get a super

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which can find peace of

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during our old age.

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