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Developed countries should take more refugees from poorer countries. Do you agree or disagree?

#countries #refugees
These days very many
people
 especially from developing
countries
 migrate to developed
countries
 in hope of a better future and quality of
life
. These
countries
 should be welcoming and have programmes that should provide refugees with an
oppurtunity
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opportunity
 to settle permanently. I completely agree with the statement and feel that rich
countries
 should be immigration friendly. Several
people
 living in poor
countries
 don't lead a good
life
 because of various reasons.
Firsly
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Firstly
First
, there is a lack of
job
oppurtunities
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opportunities
 in
such
countires
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countries
.
Job
oppurtunities
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opportunities
 are limited in comparison to the
ever increasing
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 population. It is for
this
 reason that many
people
 are compelled to work
on
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job
 positions at an extremely low wage rate.
Secondly
, because of low
income
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 they are unable to afford the basic
neccessities
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necessities
 of
life
 like housing, food, and education for their children. They are forced to take loans
due
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 their poor financial situation.
As a result
, the vicious cycle of poverty continues. Developed
countires
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countries
 can actually come to aid for these poor nations by offering a hand of help.
This
 will certainly improve their relations with other
countries
. Since
,
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 their economies are capable of accomodating several additional
people
, they should introduce various easy immigration programmes. Refugees can take advantage of
plently
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plenty
 of
job
oppurtunities
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opportunities
 available. The government can support these
people
 by providing free healthcare and education for their children.
For instance
,
countries
 like Canada and Australia are immigration friendly. Every year their governments invite and accept millions of
people
 from other
countries
.
This
also
 helps in
growth
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 of their economies as well. To conclude, every person has a right to lead a good quality of
life
.
This
 can be achieved only if nations support one another.
Therefore
, developed
countries
 that have the required resources should come forward and accept refugees from poor
countries
.
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