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The development of modern technology in communication has benefited some people; however, others have had no benefits at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#development #technology #communication #people
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recent times, it is considered that modern automation in
communication
 helping most
of
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the
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individuals with their developments in various areas.
However
, others
claims
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 that there is
not
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 benefit of using it. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the statement as technology is playing
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 role all over the world and still there are making improvements to use it better.
This
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substantiate
 my opinion in the following paragraphs with
revelant
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relevant
 examples.
Firstly
,
Communication
 plays a crucial role across the nation and it always keeps
people
 connected. Social media,
such
 as
facebook
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 and
watsapp
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WhatsApp
Whatsapp
 are on the demand in
this
 automation which allows individuals to communicate
to
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 their loved
one
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 and share their common interests.
Although
people
 staying far from their
family
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, still able to contact them with the help of
the
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social media.
Moreover
, it has broken the boundaries between countries. Tele-conferencing,
for instance
, allows
people
 from
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nation
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 to connect immediately via video meeting.
This
 is the most efficient way of communicating which is in
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 currently.
On the other hand
, some
people
claims
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 that modern advancement may not be efficient and secured for
privacy
.
However
, there are improvements in the
communication
 development for
the
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privacy
 which helps
people
 to use the technology securely. Users can modify the setting while using the automation where
user
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users
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 can apply filters to their personal information. Many professionals introduced
updagraded
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upgraded
upgrade
computer
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computers
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 for the
users
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user's
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 personal
privacy
.
For example
, while using social media,
people
 can apply strong
filter
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filters
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 not to display their data publicly.
Thus
, it helps
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 data
privacy
 by using new
technolgy
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technology
. To conclude, new innovations in modern technology in
communication
 certainly benefited many
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the
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individuals.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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