In some areas of the US , a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to go outdoor after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. to what extend do you agree of disagree with this?

preventing teenagers from going outside after a specific time at night if they are not escorted by a grown-up is applied in some regions of the US. Personally,

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I will discuss my point of view. in the beginning, I think it is a brilliant idea to impose a curfew on

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situation since it will be a kind of support for

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who are struggled to make full control of their children during

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complicated phase; I mean a

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stage. really, it is the most exhausting stage, since they tend to break up all

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' rules and boundaries.so that, it is much more helpful to work as a unit with the government,

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of leaving the

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encounter their children's difficulties alone.

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restriction will limit the negative impacts yield from leaving the

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outside their home alone for late time, which leads to unresponsible behaviours,sometimes.

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, they may tend to go to unsafe places

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and make themselves vulnerable to the risk from dangerous people.

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, they may get used to take illegal drugs or get engaged in criminal damage. really,

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believe that

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decision will have a vast benefit for

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and the government itself. to conclude, forcing the

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to stay at home after a particular time at night the right decision. and will support the

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to avoid different kinds of challenges with their children,

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in general, it will decrease the number of crimes in the community and help the

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to exceed

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stage safely and without harming their selves or harming others.