Task 2:More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many
people
feels
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that printed newspapers are no longer required in
this
era.
However
,
newspaper
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the newspaper

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was the only source of
information
before
invention
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the invention

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of
media
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the media

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. In my opinion, I partially agree
to
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with

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the above statement.
This
essay will substantiate my agreements and disagreements in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.
Firstly
, newspapers have become an essential part
in
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of

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our daily life. We live in a society where our lives are directly or indirectly impacted
from
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by

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what's

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whats
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happening around us. Newspapers provide
information
and general knowledge to the common
people
.
Moreover
,
information
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the information

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given in a
newspaper
is authenticated and efficient, no matter what the subject is.
Additionally
, a printed
newspaper
is affordable
by
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for

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everyone and
the
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apply

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elderly
people
prefer reading it
in
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on

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a hard copy.
For example
, they are
people
who read the printed copy of
news
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the news

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every morning with a cup of tea which helps them in gaining knowledge.
On the other hand
, in
this
modern world of
Internet
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the Internet

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, many
people
are adopting a habit of reading the news online which provides those timely updates within seconds from all over the world.
Moreover
, it allows
individual
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individuals

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to read updates according to their choice. There are tons of websites that
provides
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various
information
from politics to show business. At the same time,
people
can simultaneously do other work reading it.
For instance
,
internet
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the internet

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provides updates on different areas based on the requirement and
interest
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interests

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of the individuals.
Thus
,
internet
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the internet

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is becoming popular among youngsters. To summarise, based on the above parameters,
although
there are many types of media to read news,
traditional
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the traditional
a traditional

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newspaper
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newspapers

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cannot be underappreciated or irreplaceable.
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