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Task 2:More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many
people
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feels
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 that printed newspapers are no longer required in
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,
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newspaper
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the newspaper
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 was the only source of
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 before
invention
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 of
media
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the media
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. In my opinion, I partially agree
to
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 the above statement.
This
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Firstly
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, newspapers have become an essential part
in
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 our daily life. We live in a society where our lives are directly or indirectly impacted
from
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what's
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whats
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 happening around us. Newspapers provide
information
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 and general knowledge to the common
people
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.
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,
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information
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the information
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 given in a
newspaper
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 is authenticated and efficient, no matter what the subject is.
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, a printed
newspaper
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 is affordable
by
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 everyone and
the
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elderly
people
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 prefer reading it
in
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on
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 a hard copy.
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, they are
people
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 who read the printed copy of
news
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the news
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 every morning with a cup of tea which helps them in gaining knowledge.
On the other hand
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, in
this
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the Internet
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, many
people
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 are adopting a habit of reading the news online which provides those timely updates within seconds from all over the world.
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, it allows
individual
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individuals
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 to read updates according to their choice. There are tons of websites that
provides
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 various
information
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 from politics to show business. At the same time,
people
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 can simultaneously do other work reading it.
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,
internet
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the internet
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 provides updates on different areas based on the requirement and
interest
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interests
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 of the individuals.
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,
internet
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the internet
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 is becoming popular among youngsters. To summarise, based on the above parameters,
although
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 there are many types of media to read news,
traditional
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the traditional
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newspaper
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newspapers
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 cannot be underappreciated or irreplaceable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • printed paper newspapers
  • digital news platforms
  • tangible reading experience
  • replicated
  • disconnect from technology
  • focused
  • immersive
  • accessible
  • elderly
  • archival source
  • preserving historical events
  • local news coverage
  • advertising opportunities
  • small businesses
  • convenience
  • instant updates
  • valued
  • completely replaced
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