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More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many
people
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 feel that printed
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 are no longer required in
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,
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 was the only source of
information
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 before the invention of the media. In my opinion, I partially agree with the above statement.
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Firstly
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,
a
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newspapers
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 has become an essential part of our daily life. We live in a society where our lives are directly or indirectly impacted
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what's
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whats
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what's
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 happening around us. The
newspapers
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 provide
information
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 and general knowledge to the common
people
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.
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,
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information
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the information
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 given in the newspaper is authenticated and efficient, no matter what the subject is.
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, a printed newspaper is affordable
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for
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 everyone and elderly
people
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 prefer reading it
in
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on
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 a hard copy.
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, they are individuals who read the printed copy of
news
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the news
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 every morning with a cup of tea which helps them in gaining knowledge.
On the other hand
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, in
this
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 modern world of the Internet, many
people
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 are adopting a habit of reading the news online which provides those timely updates within seconds from all over the world.
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, it allows
individual
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individuals
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 to read updates according to their choice. There are tons of websites that
provides
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 various
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 from politics to show business. At the same time,
people
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 can simultaneously do other work reading it.
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,the internet provides updates on different areas based on the requirement and interests of the individuals.
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, the internet is becoming popular among youngsters. To summarise, based on the above parameters,
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 there are many types of media to read news,
a traditional
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traditional newspapers
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newspapers
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 cannot be underappreciated or irreplaceable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • printed paper newspapers
  • digital news platforms
  • tangible reading experience
  • replicated
  • disconnect from technology
  • focused
  • immersive
  • accessible
  • elderly
  • archival source
  • preserving historical events
  • local news coverage
  • advertising opportunities
  • small businesses
  • convenience
  • instant updates
  • valued
  • completely replaced
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