Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

These days, there has been a passionate argument about depending on the

internet

. Many people claim that using

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is

essential

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and necessary

tools

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in education, while there are others who believe that websites have drawbacks on operation

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. In my

opinion

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I think that

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has an effective tool

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modern education. The following paragraphs discuss both advantages and disadvantages and reach a reasonable conclusion.

To begin

with, it is commonly believed that

internet

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bring

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new methods in teaching and gaining more knowledge. To clarify that, teachers can support teaching materials with

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technique

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example, videos and valuable games which encourage students to participate more.

Moreover

, using the latest simulation approach especial in science

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will enhance students thinking and maintain it.

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,

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of education is planning to flip all books to be electronic books which no other way can escape from using the

internet

.

Also

,

Internet

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the door for all consultation institute

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and businesses company to reach people from

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part in the country. To illustrate, during the

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lock down

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due to COVID 19 successful companies were the

first

organization that employee technical tools to deliver courses via

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application

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applications

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such

as Zoom and Teams. As result, thinking out of the box make them unique and increased company profit as well.

On the other hand

, the new generations

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their own way to pleasant childhood, one of them is uploaded many games on devices which allowed them to enjoy their day. Despite

of

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Website being effective, but it can be harmful to youngsters brains. It is often said that

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using

internet

bring addiction to useful and not useful information, recent studies find children spend approximately 7 hours per day on their gadget. As

consequences

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, eyesight is affected, rate growth in stress and depression and being lonely. In conclusion, I would like to close

this

argument by assuring that the

internet

is extortionary tools for fruitful outcomes whose can

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in people in their careers and lifestyle.