Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We live in an age when the percentage of

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crime has been raised annually.

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many people believe that there are a lot of causes that affect the number of

crimes

, it could be reduced and controlled.

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essay will tackle some possible reasons and some solutions will be explained in the following paragraphs. In the

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place, there are many reasons that increase the rate of

crimes

. One reason behind

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is the psychological issues that might lead some people to do things without any consideration.

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, living with divorced parents or unstable

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could drive children or teenagers to be violets. Another reason is poverty.

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could be a major effect on the crime rate because I believe a lot of people who try to steal houses, money or valuable property, tend to kill others to hide their practices.

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, teenagers and children, who play games

such

as war or fighting, are more likely to involve in criminal activities. On the other

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, many solutions could limit the number of

crimes

. One way is to activate the role of government, institutions, hospitals, and

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.

For instance

, teachers in school should educate the students about the danger of the crime and what are the consequences of doing

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these activities.

In addition

, hospitals should make a blood test

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their patients to check they didn’t get any drugs. In conclusion, I would like to close

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question by assessing that in spite of the high rate of

crimes

, some solutions might be valid to overcome or decline

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percentage.

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