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In future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays the technological developments enable us to read the book and newspaper on electronic devices, rather than buying
books
 or newspapers. It makes some
people
 believe that in future everything will be digitalised and
people
 will stop printing
books
 and
newspaper
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newspapers
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.
First
 of all, e-
books
 and online news portals are continuously getting popular among
the
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readers because they didn’t need to carry
books
 or newspapers with them. It just required only a mobile device to access them and continue reading.
Secondly
, the cost of e-
books
 is relatively lower than the
books
 because there is no extra expenditure o manufacturing and printing associated with e-
books
.
Also
, digital
books
 are
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 friendly, which is a great advantage for them. Evert year roughly 80 to 160 thousand trees are cut down to produce papers. But,
as a result
 of the increasing popularity of digital
books
, the figure is decreasing day by day, which is good news for protecting our environment.
On the other hand
, traditional printed
books
 and magazines have existed
from
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 centuries and they have created some kind of emotional connection and value for
people
. When a man reads a book, and he likes it, he most probably would like to have it, in form of tangible things.
Books
 are a form of art, like statues and painting. You can have a picture of some
painting
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 on your mobile phone but having the painting itself in your home has an intangible value. To conclude, I believe that the number of
books
 will decrease considerably and maybe even dramatically,
however
, printed tangible
books
 will still be demanded by many
people
 as they have some aura and value
in addition
 to the things that are written inside.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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