Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Migrants from poor states should be accommodated and offered
with
basic needs of food and living. I strongly agree with the idea of allowing foreigners to come and settle in developed Change preposition
apply
countries
against certain criteria and provide them with fundamental necessities of Use synonyms
life
. Use synonyms
This
will give them a chance to earn bread and butter for themselves and their families. It will Linking Words
also
help Linking Words
Use synonyms
country’s
growth because newly settled will pay Correct article usage
the country’s
taxes
which will contribute towards the better economy of that Use synonyms
country
.
Use synonyms
People
should be given an opportunity Use synonyms
of
employment to be able to take care of their loved ones. Change preposition
for
This
is Linking Words
basic
right of every human to have food, housing, health, and education. The governments should be accountable to provide Add an article
a basic
the basic
such
necessities of Linking Words
life
to every citizen. Developed Use synonyms
countries
like U.S, Australia and Canada are Use synonyms
the
examples of Correct article usage
apply
such
states that took responsibility and delivered essential to their Linking Words
people
.
Use synonyms
Economy
of the Add an article
The economy
country
heavily depends on the Use synonyms
taxes
collected by its Use synonyms
people
; Use synonyms
therefore
, Linking Words
taxes
should be collected from locals and refugees, according to their income, benefits and facilities provided to them. Developed and Use synonyms
corruption free
government collects Add a hyphen
corruption-free
taxes
from their Use synonyms
people
and make sure to spend it back on their nation for the betterment of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
country
and to improve the living standard of their Add an article
the country
people
. Use synonyms
Countries
like U.S, Australia and Canada attracts immigrants to Use synonyms
fulfill
Change the spelling
fulfil
its
need Correct pronoun usage
their
of
skilled and unskilled Change preposition
for
labor
and give them Change the spelling
labour
basics
of Correct article usage
the basics
life
. Use synonyms
This
way they become part of Linking Words
countries
economic growth by working in that Use synonyms
country
and paying the Use synonyms
taxes
.
In conclusion, outsiders should be accepted by rich Use synonyms
countries
and give them fundamental support of Use synonyms
life
. By Use synonyms
this
, they will get an opportunity to better employment which will improve their own living and Linking Words
as a
Linking Words
result
they will become taxpayers contributing to Add a comma
,result
economy
of Add an article
the economy
Use synonyms
country
.Add an article
the country
a country
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite