Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Migrants from poor states should be accommodated and offered
with
basic needs of food and living. I strongly agree with the idea of allowing foreigners to come and settle in developed Change preposition
apply
countries
against certain criteria and provide them with fundamental necessities of life
. This
will give them a chance to earn bread and butter for themselves and their families. It will also
help country’s
growth because newly settled will pay Correct article usage
the country’s
taxes
which will contribute towards the better economy of that country
.
People
should be given an opportunity of
employment to be able to take care of their loved ones. Change preposition
for
This
is basic
right of every human to have food, housing, health, and education. The governments should be accountable to provide Add an article
a basic
the basic
such
necessities of life
to every citizen. Developed countries
like U.S, Australia and Canada are the
examples of Correct article usage
apply
such
states that took responsibility and delivered essential to their people
.
Economy
of the Add an article
The economy
country
heavily depends on the taxes
collected by its people
; therefore
, taxes
should be collected from locals and refugees, according to their income, benefits and facilities provided to them. Developed and corruption free
government collects Add a hyphen
corruption-free
taxes
from their people
and make sure to spend it back on their nation for the betterment of country
and to improve the living standard of their Add an article
the country
people
. Countries
like U.S, Australia and Canada attracts immigrants to fulfill
Change the spelling
fulfil
its
need Correct pronoun usage
their
of
skilled and unskilled Change preposition
for
labor
and give them Change the spelling
labour
basics
of Correct article usage
the basics
life
. This
way they become part of countries
economic growth by working in that country
and paying the taxes
.
In conclusion, outsiders should be accepted by rich countries
and give them fundamental support of life
. By this
, they will get an opportunity to better employment which will improve their own living and as a
result
they will become taxpayers contributing to Add a comma
,result
economy
of Add an article
the economy
country
.Add an article
the country
a country
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite